The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
This is nice; I love the way the ending wrapped hope around the lead character.
05/09/08
This was so touching. I really liked the "muddy footsteps."
05/10/08
Excellent descriptive writing, and your ending was just perfect.
05/17/08
So poignant! Great ending! Nice work.