The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
That tell-tale birthmark! Lolz. I like that Marah was able to get Dean's attention and then they finally had the chance to talk and realized how close they were-even before they met. That was neat. ^_^
05/10/08
The intensity of this story, especially in the beginning, was very strong. I was definitely engaged throughout. Enjoyed this piece.
Interesting story. It brings the hope with it that they really will be brother/sister friends.
Glad the brother was receptive.

Wonderful and well done tale.