The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
Awww! What a sweet story! I liked Mr. Sweet pea, especially his Gramma that was able to tell him such a story with the truth and love and everything all mixed up in it.

My favorite line was :“Gramma, even my hairs on my head hurt for him."

So cute-and just like a kid! ^_^
05/09/08
Oh, so sweet and tender and heartwrenching. You definitely brought a tear to my eye. Beautifully done.
05/13/08
You did a great job of presenting a topic that is both sad and comforting. I have had many conversations with my daughter about the older sibling that she never met. Our family too is waiting to get to heaven so we can finally meet someone with a very familiar face.
This is a beautiful story with a beautiful message--just precious.
I just saw your entry. I'm sure this was very difficult to write. It's so touching, and I know many can relate to it. You really should see about publishing it in the family life section of a magazine. Blessings, Grandma!