The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
Heehee! I like these two brothers. They're comfortable with each other in a frienship that's shared even through sibling rivalry and life. I also like how they were racing for the tree...reminds me of my brothers. ^_^
05/09/08
What a neat relationship - and I love how you told the WHOLE story in one little snippet in time. Very well done.
This story revealed true brotherhood--one who would not only tell the truth his brother needed to hear, but would also donate a kidney to him.
05/13/08
I enjoying seeing the behind-the-scenes info revealed piece by piece throughout the story. Great ending.
I love how your choice of clothing revealed that these weren't youngsters.