The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/08
Oh, nice job writing about this experience. Its so sad that it takes scary times to bring families back together again.
Laury
05/11/08
An interesting read and a touching story of the telephatic links between twins. Paragraph two, IMHO, however, may read better with lesser use of the word 'knew'. The phrase 'long time no hear from' doesn't go well with the story, and maybe the first two sentences in paragraph one should be combined. I like the story as a whole, especially the ending which strikes a chord, the words that say 'regardless of what happen ... he knew he no longer had to face it alone.