The Official Writing Challenge
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Stunningly beautiful--the imagery, your word choices rich with assonance, your use of repetition--all these combine to make a poem deep with love and grace. Wowsers.
Powerful images and word repetition-I'm anxious to know more about the back story on this one.
This is powerful, and it grabbed my attention and kept running with it. Brilliant.
To live again as a organ donor, am I right?
Your mood is dark and then refreshing.
Amazing! The flow of words, the flow of thoughts all combine in love and sadness. Superbly done.
Such power in so few words. I appreciate you sharing this.
I don't get poetry for the most part, but got this one. Great job.
This is a stunning piece of work! I reread it so I wouldn't miss a single nuance. Very well done indeed!
WOW! This is one of your best yet, I loved the repeating lines of "I Pray" that made it so real and especially the description of the Kidney, alone and everything. Just wonderful writing! ^_^
Masterfully done - and so, so moving. Just excellent.