The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
ROFL! Okay, this is simply too funny! I didn't even think for a minute that this could be blibical until the near end where he said he was a "Mama's boy" the whole ego part with doing push-ups and the usual rough housing made me have to laugh at this. Especially at the "uncle". Great job with putting old characters into a completely different and new light! Your talent shines wonderfully here! ^_^
05/08/08
Absolutely the best play/skit I've read on this site! Clever, funny, very easy to visualize, and it's also very do-able as a real skit. I'd love to see it done. The ending is outstanding--this is a super-strong entry!
05/09/08
Oh SO clever! A complete delight, and I had NO clue this would be Biblical - but of course, now I can completely see it! This must have been a blast to write - it sure was to read!
05/10/08
What a fun read. I love how you managed to get some Bible characters in it, too. Thumbs up for this very creative piece.
05/10/08
Great title. I started wondering about thier identities when you wrote about the "smelly animals".

Loved the tussleing that went on before the wild ride.
05/12/08
Delightfully creative and so much fun to read.
05/13/08
I'd love to see this skit acted out on stage by young twin brothers.
05/14/08
Wow-it all started in the womb! Very visual and descriptive and a most unique retelling of this Biblical duo. Clever, clever, clever!
05/14/08
The title totally dragged me in. This was so good, so very good. I'd love to see it performed as a skit. What a hoot!!
05/14/08
Oh, I'm clapping in praise! WEll done! Love it, especially the ending!!!! With the right actors, this would be an incredible sermon opener--for adults and youths. Love your title too! ;)
05/15/08
Congrats on your EC, Sheri! This was soooo terrific!!!!