The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/08
A very funny story. I especially liked "even the backyard birds won't eat my biscuits"! I've been there, but please don't tell anyone. Well done.
This is a rather special story! And well written. A pleasure to read. :-)
I enjoyed the story of twin sisters. It is delightful and well written. Great job!
What an adventure, I found myself reading faster to find out what what was going on.

You tied much together and the story held up.

This was fun.
05/14/08
Oh, I really would have loved more of this story! What fun!
05/14/08
This was so much fun to read. I loved it and want to go back and read more of your work. Very nice job!
05/14/08
Ooohhh! How fun! I would love to know more of what happened here! I love that both sisters went through some funky experiences with being mistaken for each other and especially the title how it fits in at the end! Great job! ^_^
05/14/08
I could see SO many different fun incidents for these two to get through. Wonderful job with the characterization, and this was definitely a fun read. Enjoyed it very much!
05/20/08
Nicely Done!