The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/08
An interesting and fun read. I would have found it easier to read if each couplet had been seperated (rather than all in two paragraphs). Yes, families are precious. Well done.
05/10/08
This is really great.
I love this line:
Ma always says work can be fun--ícause
The more hands we have, the sooner itís done.

Great rhyming with these great memories tucked within.
Congratulations!
This precious family, especially Pa, touched my heart.
Keep writing.
05/15/08
Congratulations on your EC. I like the meter or this poem--very fun.
05/16/08
What a lovely poem, so filled with genuine warmth and God's love. Congrats on your EC placing.