The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/08
I really liked the repetition of "a lot" in the first several stanzas.

Just an opinion, but this flowed really well in the beginning, and perhaps not as well toward the middle and end.

A wonderful message - and the last stanza hit me hard. Nicely done.
This is tribute to a strong family bond, one I think God intended when He planned families.