The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/08
Loved your MC - so real and vulnerable and snarky at the same time. Great read!
05/09/08
This is very funny--and I really needed a good laugh. I love the part about positioning herself between the two large cousins. The picture in my head gave me a good chuckle. Nice, fun job with the topic.
I loved the MC's voice and her imagination.
What a fun read. This has just the right touch of sarcasm. Well done.
05/12/08
This reads like a novel. "Drifting back into her lonely thoughts," the photo of the sister with the chipped tooth, and the daydream of the revenge at the end. This is perfect for the topic and extremely entertaining. Well done!
05/12/08
Delightful!
05/12/08
Oh, loved this Kristen! Love the mental picture of this poor, beat-up bridesmaid:)
I loved all her inner dialog. Don't we all do just that.

I loved how she continued it at the end with the possibility of a single dentist fulfulling her dreams.

Very fun!
I'm a little behind on my reading this week :)

I enjoy your writing style and your humor so much. This sotry is just plain fun!