The Official Writing Challenge
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As a person who really HATES to be left waiting, I could really relate to the sister's frustration with Bethany.

Something to clarify, though, if you decide to do anything more with this--why didn't Bethany just tell Jenny, the very first time, that she wanted to wait with Sam?

Sweet story.
This tugged at my heart strings. Big sister probably loved her little sister even more after seeing her heart as caring instead of selfish.
Am I a big baby or do I just weep easily? Whatever! Near the end of this story tears just popped right out of my eyes and dimmed my view. Great read, interesting and well written, and made a very important Point! Very Good! Kudos!