The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/08
Wow! After reading the beginning, your story evolved into something completely different than what I expected. I think you have a GREAT story and you've written it very well. The interaction between the sisters seemed very realistic.
05/12/08
This definitely kept my interest the whole way through. I was surprised at the end that so much time had passed, that she was thirty-four. Shows how deep and long those wounds can live on. And I too, felt the interaction between the sisters to be very real.