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Well rhymed.
So creative and cute.
Thanks for the light and refreshing poem.

Germs...how fun!
05/08/08
I like how you put this message into verse, and also enjoyed the humour and the resolution.
05/09/08
So cute and fun to read! The title caught my eye and did a good job showing the view of a growing family through the eyes of the oldest sibling.
05/10/08
This is a fun, sweet sibling poem. I had to smile at your use of "germs" (with the gem/germ confusion :) ) and "I now know my mother is really insane." ;) I think you've accurately written a childs thoughts on the arrival of siblings. :) Good work on this poem.