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I feel very bad for Mary Magdelene in this heart-wrenching story. I think the fact that her parents named her that and in light of how they have acted toward her, the name seems very foretelling. I was surprised upon reading how the father was treating the mother. Though I'm glad her prayers were answered and she is leaving the house, I feel bad about the situation and remain worried about her as a reader. How will her home life impact her in the future? Perhaps, this story is not over.
05/09/08
So sad that children have to be raised in this kind of home. The MC can be sure that God sees and knows what she's gone through.
05/09/08
Mary Magdaline's name defintiely got my interest. Your story is very heart-breaking. As to the parents being "Christian," only God knows. If this is true, I hope Mary is able to forgive and not follow in her parents "foorsteps".