The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent job with this wonderful Bible story. Your brought the mother to life with the descriptions and voice.
05/02/08
A creative approach to the topic, you did an excellent job of portraying this mother's emotions. I couldn't help to think about all the choices I make as a mom to either do things in my own understanding or to do what the Lord asks of me. I'll remember this piece next time I'm torn between the two voices. Well done.
Great re-telling here, loved the details you added. Tough choice, but so glad she did the right thing.
05/04/08
This entry made me smile. I knew there was a happy ending but I gasped and smiled in surprise anyway. Very nice job. Loved this!
Laury