The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! I'll still in tears. Your descriptions are so vivid I could feel the pain. The last paragraph is wonderful!
05/02/08
Poetic, sorrowful, emotional, gripping. WEll done.
05/03/08
Heartwrenchingly gripping, and cruelly true. Well done...
05/05/08
Amazing writing, and yes, heartwrenching.
I was so hoping this was a memory after the transition of birth, but the heart-wrenching conclusion is the story of millions of babies around the world each year.
05/07/08
The child's pain ends, the mother's goes on. Another excellent portrayal of reality for those fantasizing about freedom from responsibility and pain.