The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
What a beautiful tribute to your mother.
You have an interesting perspective to your storytelling. I think your writing is engaging, and good. But I must admit, as a reader I felt a bit bothered by the constant interuptions of the song phrases. When I tried to read the story through without them, it was more cohesive.