The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
Sweet. What a great way to realize and accept the resemblances you shared with your mother, with the hands. Beautiful idea.
Loved the ending and how she came to accept her heritage. Don't we all?
Your story is very interesting. I think you're writing is good. The only thing I would suggest regarding the content is that I'm not sure I understand why the daughter doesn't really like or want to be like her mother. I think if you broaden that aspect a little, the end would justify the means.