The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
Wonderful! At first, I was concerned at the priest's answer to the girl, but then the lady carried her straight to the cross! Marvelous grace!
06/07/05
Wow! This is one of my favorites! Good job.
06/08/05
Yes, the vacant Cross is the story isn't it.
06/09/05
Absolutely excellent in every way. One of my top picks this week. Isabela was very believable and the message is STRONG. Great work!
06/09/05
Beautifully done. I don't know if I would have used the words holy, rose again, etc to a kid.This would be even better with all of the dialogue in kidspeak.
06/09/05
I enjoyed the comparisons of the two crosses, both remind us of what happened. Very nice :)
06/10/05
Poignant and purposeful. A fantastic witness!
06/10/05
Yes, the comparison of the two crosses worked for me too. Believable characterisation. The analogy, although well know, works well in this context. I think you need to find alternative words for the 'godspeak.'
06/10/05
I agree. This is well constructed with an excellent story. Bravo Bravo!
06/10/05
A very fitting Easter entry - great message combined with a delightful story and the chance to travel!
Pat Guy  
06/11/05
Loved the two crosses intertwined into the story. Well written and well done. Could feel her emotions through out. Good job!
06/12/05
Hooked me right from the start. Excellent writing.
06/15/05
Amy, this is a charming, endearing story. I loved the use of Spanish adding to the realistic flavor.