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05/01/08
Lovely poem...
05/03/08
I think this is a well-thought out poem. I think your title is good and I really like your repeating line, "So God's provided all of this." All of God's creation has a mother "after its kind." I like the way you explored several of God's creations (the bud/blossom, seed, egg/chick, and heart/man). This is very beautiful and devotional in nature.
05/06/08
This is beautiful--love the imagery.

Knowing that the topic is "mother," I totally see what God has provided is mothers. Without the topic, I would have assumed you were writing about God rather than mothers. (But poems often go "over my head.")

Very nice job with the topic, and beautiful writing.