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05/02/08
ROFL! I felt sorry sort of, for the mother and had to laugh at the end with the word 'revenge' that summed it up! The POV of your MC is great and the slighly sarcastic tone, and your title fits, I only have to say, "ouch!" lol. Great job. ^_^
The voice is great the irony clever, and the ending perfect in your story.
05/04/08
Love the voice and the characterization of this piece. Enjoyed this read VERY much. Great ending.
05/06/08
Perfect ending. I can really dig a mother who had a difficult child, looking forward to see that child going through the sames experiences when they have a child. At times, revenge can be sweet.