The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Heehee, quite a twist here at the end! Very creative!

I liked the clue with "silly toons" Very nice. Great job. ^_^
I was thinking, "What a strange mother!" Then I felt silly for not catching on. Great job--great twist.
05/04/08
So VERY clever. Bet this was fun to write. Gave me a giggle!

This was fun and caught me off guard. Very creative!
05/06/08
This was more than just funny and clever. Wow, that packed some punch! What an effective way of sending a message to parents allowing the TV to be their child's main influence. Love this!
05/06/08
I think you captured the Mom/baby-sitter of today. :) Your poetry form is very creative and I really like your rhyme scheme in this. Your sense of humor is great. Very nice work!
05/06/08
So creative! And sadly, so true. So many families let the TV raise their kids while they go to work.