The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
How tender! I miss my dad, too, and you captured that longing perfectly! Good work!
I enjoyed this! The changes in time (flash-backs) were a little confusing, but I enjoyed the memories. Good Job!
Very nice! I enjoyed the images you evoked and the conclusion. I love to dance with Daddy! :)
06/07/05
Good job! A winner, I think!
06/07/05
Wow, you could've written that piece for this week, too!
06/08/05
Very nice piece, like others the flashback fooled me, but I recovered and discovered a very touching and well done essay.
06/08/05
Very sweet and you did a great job of describing the emotions of both you and your father.
06/09/05
Beautiful story. A touching tribute to the love between father and daughter.
06/12/05
Very touching. Probably made a lot of us remember our fathers(As a little girl, I used to stand on my dad's feet while he did the dancing. Now he is dancing in heaven). Nice descriptions. Written well.
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