The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Awww! I liked this, the 'first memory'. Makes me think as far back as I can to see if I can remember what is my first impression. Great job and interesting format. ^_^
This was an excellent idea for a way to build a poem, and you built it excellently.
05/04/08
This flowed beautifully, and blessed me immensely. Excellent.
05/06/08
I liked the way you carried the thread of searching for that first memory through the poem.