The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Your title aroused my curiosity. I loved your Middle Eastern proverb, "to preserve great facts for living, teach them to your children." I like your "only do it first" added on to the "do unto others" proverb. The phrase "smile from the heart" is wonderful. I loved your "tell Him your secrets,… Jesus will never repeat them." I have learned from your mother (through your writing). --Thank you. Your mother had a beautiful name, "Juliette" and she was a wise and beautiful person. She was Proverbs 31 personified. This is a very lovely and loving tribute to your mother.
What an awesome tribute to your mom. You must be so proud of her and to be her daughter. yes, i think many of us can't wait for the heavenly reunions! Blessings
05/05/08
Wow!! Very good, what you lack in correct sentence structure, and punctuation you more than make up with content. Your mother was right you have a gift from God. Thank you very much for your entry and I thank God for your gift. Keep writing and learning, you will definitely go far.
05/06/08
A really nice tribute to a wonderful mother, and her life shows through you, her daughter. Well done.