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I enjoyed reading this. It's amazing the picture we have of our parents, compared to the reality. The voice of this was very good. Nice job with the topic.
Your title sums up the cycle that seems following, however with different choices for each character. The last line made me smile, very nice voice. ^_^
I enjoyed your story. I identified because I found out my own very strict mother had a few secrets. I liked your ending.
Great voice - and a compelling read. I enjoyed this very much!
This is FUN! I loved hearing tales of things my own mother and her sisters used to do. This made think of that. Thumbs up!
Your title was very apt. I enjoyed the openiong few paragraphs describing the ostacles to getting into the house. The careful was in strong contrast to the realisation that your mum knew all the time.