The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
I enjoyed reading this. It's amazing the picture we have of our parents, compared to the reality. The voice of this was very good. Nice job with the topic.
05/02/08
Your title sums up the cycle that seems following, however with different choices for each character. The last line made me smile, very nice voice. ^_^
I enjoyed your story. I identified because I found out my own very strict mother had a few secrets. I liked your ending.
05/04/08
Great voice - and a compelling read. I enjoyed this very much!
This is FUN! I loved hearing tales of things my own mother and her sisters used to do. This made think of that. Thumbs up!
05/06/08
Your title was very apt. I enjoyed the openiong few paragraphs describing the ostacles to getting into the house. The careful was in strong contrast to the realisation that your mum knew all the time.