The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful-so endearing-and so well rhymed, FW may make a poem fan out of me yet.
05/01/08
I hope my children see me in the same light you see yours, because I see myself in the same light your mother saw herself. Beautifully written.
05/02/08
This brings back memories. :) I love the thought and wording of this, "I think Iíll introduce her to herself and make her view -- The mother I love so much from the only one I knew" Your pattern metaphor is perfect for this tribute to your mother. Very nice work on this.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Well done.
05/04/08
Beautiful thoughts in a creative poetic view...but the rhythm was a little "off kilter" - giving it a jarring effect instead of a Smooth & Soothing effect.
Just one person's view, however.
05/05/08
This had a lot lines that I liked, good job.