The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
A great little story and very real.
06/08/05
All this little story needs is illustrations! Your word pictures were wonderful. Very well done!
06/08/05
This was well written. I longed to hear more. A story of hope and strength seen through tarnished and still innocent eyes. Good job.
06/08/05
Cute, watch the tense shifts. I agree, illustrations a must.
06/08/05
Very sweet. I agree with Dub on the tenses changing, try to keep it all in either present or past.
06/09/05
A nice story, but wish you'd brought in Jesus somehow.
06/11/05
Engaging tale. this phrase: 'she shared the table with empty beer bottles and smelly ashtrays' said everything that needed to be said about her background. So glad she won the bunny.