The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/05
This is fabulous! A definite winner in my book!
06/06/05
Cute, funny, clever. Definitely a top eight winner.
Pat Guy  
06/06/05
Yep - definately a winner! Great!
06/06/05
What a clever poem! And such a great truth about Easter. Good job!
06/06/05
Great poem, great message, great rhythm. Simply great!
06/07/05
That was great! :-D
06/08/05
An old Christmas tale resurrected to a new Easter spin. This is wonderful! Congratulations.
06/09/05
Super neat. Thank you.
06/09/05
What a talent!! Thanks for sharing that!
06/09/05
Nice revision - it worked well and had a good message. The only line that needs work ,imho, is "When you leave this bad earth." It just didn't sound right - maybe a different adjective? Great job.

06/09/05
Note re: "bad earth"
I was trying to play off of Pearl S. Buck's, ~THIS GOOD EARTH~ . Guess I should have been more obvious. Thanks for the comments.:0)
06/10/05
A lively and enjoyable poem.
06/10/05
I like this, Linda. It reads as light ... but still has deep truth behind it. Way good! Thanks!
06/11/05
This was brilliant! I loved everything about it. It read quickly but the message is one that stays with you.
I think you've got a winner here!
Blessings, Lynda
06/11/05
Cute, clever--terrific ryhme, meter...everything. Great job!
06/13/05
WOW - this is BRILLIANT!
06/13/05
Linda, I agree with the others: WOW! Fun to read yet filled with a deep very imprtant message we all need to hear.

Great writing!

Dave
06/14/05
Fantastic, Linda! Great tool to set the record straight with truth and humor -- I'm keeping a copy handy for use next Easter. Very cleverly and skillfully written -- thank you!
06/15/05
Linda, this is a real delight! What a great message in an irresistable package!
03/24/08
I love this! A great message in a delightfully fun, then convicting, poem.