The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
Your one word title adds emphasis to this one color that described the life of Aunt Agnes. I liked the touch of red silk pajamas-especially at the end. Your last lines were wonderful! ^_^
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. I really enjoyed reading this. You used some wonderful phrases, which helped me really picture Agnes. Great job with the topic.
Congratulations! This read like it was written from the heart. I was so glad she got her pajamas.....Especially loved this "If Mother was sugar, Agnes was spice."