The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
I could see those cherry red lipstick hearts! A very good visual image here-it helped me see the aunt/neice together as best friends. I loved the dry humor and the POV, it was great for showing the relationship and the emotion. Nice job. ^_^
I enjoyed the voice and unique take on the topic. The account of the puppies bath was delightful, a fun read.
04/28/08
Great job on the young teen's voice...this is very good.
05/01/08
I love the memories here--it reads like a narrator speaking, with scenes flashing back to those days in the past--like a good movie.
05/01/08
This was delightful! I loved the voice--it was just right, and the take on the topic was great. A fun read!
05/01/08
Very well written, I loved the personality that showed thru the MC's voice.

I could see my granddaughters doing this.