The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
I like your Aunt Heidi. You bring her character to life very wonderfully and I love the descriptions and bits of history inside of it. I also liked the note at the end where the uncle had a bank account in case she ever wanted to leave-and she never did. That summed up her whole character there. Great job! ^_^
This story is well-told. I found myself engrossed in it and couldn't stop reading until the final word. I love Hideko's commitment. She sounds like a wonderful person.