The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/08
Your opening paragraph is great… I couldn't wait to read further about this Uncle Steve. I remember doing so many of the things your describe in your second paragraph. Then I had to smile at the "championship of the world" games. :) Every kid needs a hero to emulate. Uncle Steve was definitely a hero. I enjoyed this!
I enjoyed this story very much. It's very touching and well-written. Excellent job.
05/01/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is really good. I love the way you expressed the awe of a little boy. You are a very good story-teller. Nice job with the topic.
Congratulations! Loved your MC's voice, you struck the right combination of awe and true and deserved admiration. Keep up the good words.