The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
Wow! You really got me with your ending. I know this happens…but struggle with why parents would do this. This is a wonderful story. Before I finished reading I was wondering if they made men like your Uncle Jesse anymore, but that comment seems no longer valid. Excellent writing.
04/25/08
This was, ummm... very interesting! ROFL! I like how you covered both Aunt & Uncle in your entry by the same person, no less.
Laury
04/25/08
That was certainly unexpected! Man or woman, Jesse sounds like the kind of person anyone would be proud to know.