The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Just you wait! History tends to repeat itself. Cute.
04/19/08
Very funny!
04/21/08
This is adorable--you got the voice just right, and the whole thing is laced with affection disguised as exasperation. Very clever.
04/21/08
Love it! The voice is perfect, especially the one about the hardware store verses the video game. Very creative entry.
04/21/08
My dad was nothing like this man, but when did you meet my husband? I agree your voice is perfect, and the light tone a perfect way to start my day. :)
04/21/08
I loved the light and loving feel of this entry. Well done. You could send this to David Letterman to read on Father's Day.
04/21/08
Very cute. This needs to put on the fridge. Thanks for this adorable read.
04/21/08
Adorable. Really good POV. Creative take on the topic. (David Letterman may be calling you.)
04/21/08
Ha! This is cute and should be placed in every new dad's pocket so he knows just what he'll be like in a few years! I could see my dad AND my husband in this top 10 list. (;
04/21/08
Clever, clever! Good job on not being sappy ( like my entry is)on a sappy-type topic. I loved it!
04/22/08
LOL, this is great. Very different entry. Very, very well done.
04/22/08
What a cute, creative way to present this theme. And, as a dad, I accept almost everyone of these as defining myself at times --- very insightful on your part. Great job.
04/22/08
Cute and fun, Sharlyn! Have you shared this with the men in your life? Enjoyed this - made me giggle.
04/22/08
This was adorable. Neat idea you had. It's lighthearted and fun to read. This is an excellent comedic technique: take some universal truths and make us all chuckle because we relate! Well done!
04/23/08
I absolutely loved this!!!!! It is cute and funny along with very creative writing.
Excellent job!