The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/08
Ah, nice story. I like how you plugged, Horton Hears a Who, also:) I especially liked the ending. Awesome!
Wow! How did I miss this entry? And where are all the comments? Excellent portrayal of fatherhood as it should be. I like the way it comes full circle, even down to the different colored eyes. This is tender, touching, and packed with truth.
04/22/08
Great tie in with the eyes, and a topic that many youngsters need to hear today. So many think that God exists to please them, rather than the other way around.
Priceless lesson, in a well-written flashback. Loved the ending.