The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/08
This is a very good message tucked into the story. Great job! So glad it ended on a happy note.
04/21/08
Nice to see them have another chance, even if so late. I think many never get that second chance.
You did a great job of imparting the daughter's ambivalence, then drawing the reader along with her to a natural-seeming glimmer of hope.