The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/08
You captured "kid" personalities in this, with each trying to outdo the other. I almost cheered for Janie for "giving" her father something on Father's Day, the homecooked meal and the play. I'm glad you showed that you don't always have to spend money to give a gift. This was very heartwarming.