The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
What a lovely picture of a godly upbringing and growing maturity. (From chocolate bunnies to a box of mixed chocolates!)
06/08/05
"Lovely poem" Thoughtful words and precious memories. It brought a smile to my face, each time I read it.
06/09/05
Nice poem, the memories of youthful Easter in comparison then the progression...e.e.cummings wrote several like this, althought, I believe, not as well. Thank you.
06/09/05
This shows how important it is to train up our children in the ways of God. Very nice.
06/10/05
It reads like a poem but I kept looking for the ending words to rhyme. It looks like a poem but read like free verse. We all had our time of chocolate rabbits but reached a place where we came to see that Easter is so much greater than this. The true meaning of Easter is both a time of sadness and joy. A time for hope and expectation of life eternal. Thanks for sharing your memories.
06/11/05
Lovely memories, lovingly shared. A little confusing 'cos you move from rhyming couplets to free verse and back again.