The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Wow--what a story! Excellently written, you perfectly described the tension of the running soldier. It reads like a movie.
I was transported to this scene. Perfect for topic, great telling of an untold story. Loved the part about being ferried by angels. Outstanding.
04/17/08
This is my favorite of the Advanced ones that I've read so far. At first I thought it was incredibly unrealistic for a Roman soldier to run instead of fighting, but when I realized he was running to tell his children of Jesus...then it was perfect! And it was very well written with vivid imagery. Well done.
04/18/08
Wow! You've really brought this Biblical story to life. You've done a great job of relaying the imminent threat to the reader. I wonder how many Roman soldiers we'll meet in heaven? Very nice work on this.
I love this POV. It was a great biblical angle to take on this topic. Excellent!
04/22/08
Interesting take on the topic. Well written!
This is some of the best writing I have found. Good job.