The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
The Title caught my attention--this is an excellent Devotion, especially as we get closer to Father's Day. This is a perfect line, “Please Jesus…may I learn only to satisfy my children’s needs. Lord helps me also as a reasonable father, to discipline them regarding their greeds.”
04/17/08
This is encouraging and inspiring for all the Dad's out there! It's especially great with father's day coming up-I loved how you sort of made it into a devotional at the end with using the numbers and ending with a prayer. Very nicely done! ^_^