The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
I felt as if I knew your "Paw Paw" I loved this being short-and very good! I feel as if I didn't miss a thing and got a glimpse at one special memory here. I liked the details with lookout Mt.-very realistic! ^_^
04/19/08
What nice memories! I could see it as I moved through the story.
I loved the way you slowed down the precious memory of your Paw-Paw. Thank you for taking me there.