The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
I love this-the third verse is my favorite, but I like how you used the theme of hands and showed them through all the stages of life. It flowed very nicely and I liked to see how he changed to boy from father. Nice job! ^_^
This poem has a homey feel about it, almost as if it were of a bygone era. It took me back to a safer time I sometimes long for.
04/19/08
This is very sweet. It's a nicely done piece of writing and very heart warming.
04/21/08
What a tender, loving poem. I sense a great deal of love here and it comes through beautifully.