The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
This is a very nice tribute to your father.
Laury
I love this! I like the form. especially. I can see the photos in black and white.
( at least in my mind.)
04/18/08
It was beautiful until you put me in it at the end. :)A lovely tribute to what sounds like a really great dad.
04/20/08
A touching memory of a father. Especially liked the verse where the father left his friends to help his kid get to sleep.
A very touching and tender tribute. This meant a lot to you to write this, didn't it? Blessings.
Thomas, this is such a perfectly woven bittersweet portrait. It's haunting beauty touches my heart deeply. You have such a wonderful skill, a true master's touch in this excellent free verse!
08/22/08
Oh, this is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.