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04/17/08
I want to know! I want to know! lol. I'm hoping that he said..."yes" and gave up the comfort to bring in a little more 'love'. I liked this, it's fresh and different-with a good point. Your title is catchy too! ^_^
04/17/08
This battle is captured so perfectly, from the title to the final sentence. At the end, I wonder--what happens next? My guess is he went through with the adoption!
I like the way you made the whole article a conversation with God. It is different and effective. The non-pat ending is also refreshing and thought provoking. Well done.
04/19/08
A person I respected once told me that for everything we gain, there's something we give up. I think that is true and this article captures it well. Nicely done.