The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
This is very creative...I like the format and I really like Rachel. I was rooting for her and hoping that she would find strength from on high. There are such short glimpses here that I wish I knew the whole story...great job! My only note is at the end, I think a typo- "in example" should be "an example"? It could just be me though-great job here! ^_^
This is real-time life. Humans are flawed, difficult, complex. What great insight you have as a writer, to see and to relate so well.
04/19/08
Beautifully written. I felt the pain of all involved.
04/19/08
Nicely done. Great capture of what is for many the reality of human relationships.
This was painful to read and I'm sure painful to write but you did a great job! Kudos.
04/23/08
My admiration goes out to Rachel. She is courageous and feeling and we feel her strength came from the Lord.