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I don't know why but this made the tears flow. I have gone through this scenario as a grandparent dozens of time and you have captured every nuance of the "goodbye thing." My 3-year-old grandson would cry all the way to the car, "Come on, Grandma, Come on, Grandma." He couldn't bear to leave me.
So precious. I love this entry!
Just perfect. Loved the flow, the rhythm, the descriptions and especially the realistic feelings expressed.
You set the scene so well. Well done!
Congratulations, Sandra, on placing 6th in your level and 18th overall. Great work!