The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
I don't know why but this made the tears flow. I have gone through this scenario as a grandparent dozens of time and you have captured every nuance of the "goodbye thing." My 3-year-old grandson would cry all the way to the car, "Come on, Grandma, Come on, Grandma." He couldn't bear to leave me.
So precious. I love this entry!
04/10/08
Just perfect. Loved the flow, the rhythm, the descriptions and especially the realistic feelings expressed.
04/11/08
You set the scene so well. Well done!
04/18/08
Congratulations, Sandra, on placing 6th in your level and 18th overall. Great work!