The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/08
Great fun! I liked this imaginative entry.
04/13/08
This is packed with clever creativity, and I loved the ending!
04/13/08
I only caught on to your zany style when the mongooses appeared but thereafter I loved it. Excellent. Sorry you haven’t had more comments than these! Certainly kept my attention.
04/14/08
Fun and creative. Lose the exclamation marks.
A delightful romp in God-given creativity.
04/17/08
Congratulations on your EC. This is really creative, and so cute. Good job.
I really like the subtle way the loving grandparents taught such valuable lesson to their grandchild. He is one very lucky boy for many, many reasons. Congratulations on your EC placement. It is well deserved - Loren