The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/08
Excellent story with a hopeful message. YOur notes at the end show a compassionate, caring heart.
These are very effective vignettes for the message you are delivering. Your writing is clear and concise. I wonder how it would work to tell three different viewpoints of the same situation (just a thought, even though I like it the way it is).